Experiences of a Lifetime
Ever since I can remember
Summer has been a special time
Full of adventure and memories.
From Pacific to Atlantic
I have seen the sights,
Experienced the cultures, and
Visited the museums.
I have
Explored dark, murky caves,
Braved the cold Rocky Mountain nights,
Blasted off into outer space with NASA,
Scuba dived with the exotic fish of the Caribbean, and
Screamed at the top of my lungs all the way down
Summit Plummet.
I have
Marveled at the Grand Canyon,
Starred at the big heads of our nations past presidents,
Witnessed the faithfulness of Old Faithful,
Experienced Christmas in the summer
With the lights of Vegas, and
Danced in a Hawaiian Luau.
I will never forget these special moments
And I thank my parents everyday for giving me
The experiences of a lifetime.
Ever since I can remember
Summer has been a special time
Full of adventure and memories.
From Pacific to Atlantic
I have seen the sights,
Experienced the cultures, and
Visited the museums.
I have
Explored dark, murky caves,
Braved the cold Rocky Mountain nights,
Blasted off into outer space with NASA,
Scuba dived with the exotic fish of the Caribbean, and
Screamed at the top of my lungs all the way down
Summit Plummet.
I have
Marveled at the Grand Canyon,
Starred at the big heads of our nations past presidents,
Witnessed the faithfulness of Old Faithful,
Experienced Christmas in the summer
With the lights of Vegas, and
Danced in a Hawaiian Luau.
I will never forget these special moments
And I thank my parents everyday for giving me
The experiences of a lifetime.
I really like your writing! Your voice shines throughout the piece and you convey your excitement and appreciation for the experiences you've had. This will be a great example to use in the classroom!
ReplyDeleteBrooke
Wow, that was some creative writing! I really like your story. Cute background too!
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ReplyDeleteYou have great voice and word choice in your writing! I really enjoyed reading your poem and I share some of the same experiences that you described!
Whitney
That was great writing Jennie! Have you really been in a space ship? That is so cool! Your blog looks good...keep up the nice work!
ReplyDeleteGreat Story! Your blog looks good!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story. Your personality is really shown in your writing. Your blog is looks really nice and put together!!
ReplyDeleteYour story is really creative. I really liked looking at your pictures that you had put on here..
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